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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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From: hubin@163.com Date：dec,26th,2008 To:KPOHAssles@hotmsll.com Subiect:To establish business relationgships Dear Sir or Madam, I knew your new product of No.5670 during the eshibititiong held we aie looking for forward your early repoyggx x x x x x x x x x x x x x c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c c gg gggggggggggggggg gggggggggggg gggggggggggg gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg ggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggfdgadsfgsdgdfsgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
