2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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i really feel happy for you come my hometown,it must be a long way ,and i promise that you will never regret it.there is an interesting place that i want take you to. it is not a long way from my home to there,so it is very convinent.it is a historical museum,i remember that you said you were very interestes in our chinese histroy,there are many ancient things in the museum in all ages,such as the poets and pictures in the tang danasty,the art of war writen by sun bin,and your favorite educators mr.kong,there are many his books in the museum.