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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8983
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意文中的句子错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Thesedays there is a general discussion about the issue of judging a person by theirappearance. People's opinions differ greatly concerning this phenomenon. Is it wise to judge a person by their appearance? Itis definitely not。 Thereare numerous reasons explaining this phenomenon. First and foremost, although good appearance is helpful to leave others agood impression in the first meeting, kindness and inner thought are the mostimportant to make friends for all life time. Secondly,many facts reflect that some people with charming appearance make no

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