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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意： 词数不少于60.
提示词： 游乐园 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
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our spring outing yesterday,we kenw that tomorrow will hold spring outing .we all exciting about it. this morning,we took things what we need and climb the mountain.when we arrived the top of the mountian,we found there has too much rubbish.it made us feeling bad.Thus we all suggested that cleaning it.After a long time we finished it,we all think it's a good behavir.
