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The reason is why i want join it: Firstly,my home is spacious and comfortable actually i have a personal car.Senodly,i am good at English and skillful in communicate useing English ,i like exchange happy ang ideas with other people, i think this a good chance to let we know eachother.And another hand,i was received British students last year,i had learnd something about how to make a good relationship with forgien people and how to deal with thier problems. please give me this chance, i will do my best! Thanks!