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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(19):青年人的青睐

发布时间:2014-08-29 18:01浏览次数:393
要求:
1 有关旅游的书特别受青年人的青睐。(be popular with)
2 尽管你很忙,你还是不该把孩子一个人留在家里玩电脑游戏。(leave)
3 你一旦养成坏习惯,改掉它是很难的。(get rid of)
4 学生们自愿筹款帮助发展中国家的穷人。(volunteer)
5 更糟糕的是,他的拼写错误不是一个,而是几十个。(not…but…)
用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

Supernatural Phenomenon I like to see US TV series, most are telling about the supernatural phenomenon, like the vampire, ghost and so on. The plots are so attractive, I start to wonder if there is ghost or vampire in the world. As the science can’t explain everything, still there are a lot of weird phenomenon remain people to research, some people believe there is other space besides the earth. They believe the ghost is invisible, when people die, their soul get out of their bodies and then exist with human being. Now I believe in science, there exists no ghost, it is people’s imagination. Long before ago, our ancestors made up the stories, they are the part of the history myths, as the time went by, more and more read the stories and believe what they said are true. The unknown phenomenon will be explained by the scientists one day.

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