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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(19):青年人的青睐

发布时间:2014-08-29 18:01浏览次数:392
要求:
1 有关旅游的书特别受青年人的青睐。(be popular with)
2 尽管你很忙,你还是不该把孩子一个人留在家里玩电脑游戏。(leave)
3 你一旦养成坏习惯,改掉它是很难的。(get rid of)
4 学生们自愿筹款帮助发展中国家的穷人。(volunteer)
5 更糟糕的是,他的拼写错误不是一个,而是几十个。(not…but…)
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作者词汇基础扎实;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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Control Your Emotion You must control and direct your emotions not abolish them. Besides, abolition would be the daunting task. Emotions are like a river. Their power can be dammed up and released under control and direction, but is cannot be held forever in check. Sooner or later the dam will burst, unleashing catastrophic destruction. Your negative emotions can also be controlled and directed. PMA and self-discipline can remove their harmful effects and make them serve constructive purposes. Sometimes fear and anger will inspire intense action. But you must always submit your negative emotions--and you positive ones--to the examination of your reason before releasing them. Emotion without reason is a dreadful enemy. What faculty provides the crucial balance between emotions and reason? It is your willpower, or ego, a subject which will be explored in more detail below. Self-discipline will teach you to throw your willpower behind either reason or emotion and amplify the intensity of their expression. Both your heart and your mind need a master, and they can find the master in your ego. However, your ego will fill their role only if you use self-discipline. In the absence of self-discipline, your mind and heart will fight their battles as they please. In this situation the person within whose mind the fight is carried out often gets badly hurt.

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