拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配。
Nowadays,we are living in a fast development world fulled of misguided information and we are also lack of the experience to certify what we see and listen is true or false.So it is unwise to make a conclusion immediately without our personal thinking. Firstly,There is no doubt that there are many fake news in our eyesight,which is to attract our attention for them to rise their reputation.Then,in order to judge whether is it true,it is necessary to upgrade our experience about identifying the news though reading more books and doing more practical exercise. Last but not the least, not only can we have the ability to judge the information, we should keep ourselves bright and can forecast the incorrect news to others. In conclusion, as a intelligent person,it is unwise to judge the thing with our first thinking and first sight.Making a perfect survey and serious thinking,can help us draw a suitable conclusion.
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