2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(53):城市怎样开始

作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；请注意分段。

Nowadays we live in the flourishing city,but do you know what is the baganning of the city? Before long ,the people is so few,depends on the move about in search of pasture and go hunting.After they learned how to plant then were inhabit a region and bulit the village.Soon the population has raisen,surged up some villages,then developed the city slowey.After the machine came out ,they were set up the factory,more and more people lived together,thereupon the city became huge.