题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Nowadays,it sparks a hot discussion to keep trust.Admittedly,nothing is more important than trust in a relationship.However,many people take in others who are familiar with them for the sake of themselves,which contributes people to hesitate whether they can keep trust or not. It is a common occurence that some people are deceived by his or her best friend,or a customer buy something fake.All of these phenomena suggest that trust is gradually fading out from our lives.Can we let it go at these?The answer is obvious.On no account can we ignore the value of trust.The most crucial reason is that trust can shorten the distance between person and person.If there were no trust amongst friends,are they still friends?No, they aren't.If so,it is conceivable that what our society will be. In conclusion,we should bring home to ourselves the importance of trust.Cheating is the equivalent of cheating.Only we keep trust,our life will be marvelous and our society more peaceful and harmonious.