文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文章层次较为清晰;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇。
when it comes to the issue that whether the conclusion is true that we draw from what we see or hear , everyone vary in their opinions. there is a view that drawing conclusion rightly by what you see or hear is not advisable. in my mind,i agree with this view. the reasons for the view are as follows. for one thing, sometimes, some people may lie to you for some secrets that he or she dose not want you to know. for another thing, what you see or hear probably are only a proportion of the whole thing. if you do not know the whole thing, you are likely to draw a wrong conclusion. as far as i am concerned, to see or hear carefully is necessary for us but we should be more wise when we draw conclusion. noly in this way can we avoid some unnecesssray mistakes.
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