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On Excessive Packaging Nowadays, we can see lots of goods with beautiful covers. However, the quality of the goods is not as good as people think about. Why do the bussinessmen are devote theirself to excessive packaging? In one hand, We all know that it is difficult for a production to stand out from others, which make bussinessmen focus on the package of their productions. In other hand, the more beautiful the goods is the more expensive it will be. In my view, it is meanningless to waste sources on such an useless aspect. And the beautiful covers often mislead custmors to buy a useless thing. so, here i'd like to say that we should focus on the quality of goods rather than its covers. There is a tip to solve the problem. Mabey, the goverment can reduce taxes of products with simple enviromental-friendly covers and high quality.
