2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

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The behavior that to jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something is wrong. The individuals always hold the idea is what they seeing and hearing it's must be true.Some ignored the importance of practice.For the one hand，when we learn something we never heard.We should keep practice not just stay at seeing or hearing.Vision or listen sometimes our mind will be misleaded.Then，if you really want to know something you never heard.You should try to practice.For instance，the famous scientist Edison who has invented the electronic light.Up till now，our lives also can't leave that.In the invention process，Edsion tired more than hundred of material to connect light inside the bulb.He finally made it through by the practice.Even in this day，he's name also impressed peoples mind.