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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12881
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

From the picture above vividly shows that the Internet has become more and more popular in our daily life.In the picture, parents contact with their child by sending E-mails through the computer,expressing their feelings to their child.It is common to use computer to communicate with each other nowadays. As it is,with the development of our country,people's living standard has improved a lot.And now,each family has their own computer.But it is fact that there are both positive and negative of the computer.Firstly,it is convenient to communicate with people by computer, parents can see their child and know what their child is doing recently by reading blogs.Secondly,with the computer,students can get guidance from a professor in a distant city.However,some students lost theirselves in computer games so that they can not focus on their studIes.Also,people are so absorbed in communicating on line that they may fail to catch words while others talk to them. In a wod,we should use computer properly,take the full advantage of it ,and live a preferable life.

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