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Nowadays, with the rapid development of technology, there are an increasing number of e-books come into our lives. ted with the e-books and realize suddenly that those traditional ones are your wise choices. “Whether e-books will replace traditional books” is a question involves considerable discussion. Yet no one can tell exactly what the answer is, except the fact itself in the future.