雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用学术词汇；可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

It is very popular for young and old man to go a board to visit today. Different history and varied culture can give people wonderful visual experience as most people think. However, you have to consider some risks may exist during your visit. Benefits and adverse conditions exist at the same time. Firstly, let say something relax about going a board for visiting. Most of people like to try some things they never do before. Go a board to visit can let you feel different culture and history, which can help you increase your knowledge, and broaden your eyesight. Some famous tourists say that tour can shape your good characteristics that make your minds more mature and more deep. I think it is truth for most of us. When you go to a visit at Yellow Stone Forest in America, huge power of the nature such as erupting volcanoes, almost perfect ecosystem ,may surprise and conquer you. At the same time, an absolutely different circumstance can help you release your daily pressure from work and life, after this visit you may have more energy to work. However, some concerns also need to be considered when you go to another country, because you have to face an environment that is definitely familiar for you. You may make mistakes because of your ignorance about the local rules or costumes, which will get you unnecessary troubles. I often watch the news that tourists are rubbed or be killed by local people. The reason that result this strategy to happen is poor revolt power for tourists. Of course, you can not abandon your thoughts to go a visit to foreign, instead you can do enough prepare before you live your city, which can ensure you have a good vacation. So, the final conclusion I draw is that there are advantages and disadvantages for visiting to other countries, you should realize your destination, including culture, history and local costumes. Many things you can scan on the Internet.They will help you take a wonderful vacation.