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Beijing is an ancient, political city, which enjoy high level of civilization and large sums of places of interests. Of all the places of interests here, I love the Palace Museum the most. So when my foreign friend come to my hometown, I definitely take her to there. The Palace Museum is existing biggest and most integrity building cluster in China. Nevertheless, it has been one of the five greatest temples in the world by the fame. Buildings there are Because the king of Ming and Qing Dynasty lived there, visitors can see a large sum of precious treasures, which is made of jade, silver or gold.
