2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? Along with the advance of the society,increasingly more problems brought to our attanion,one of which is that many a parents help their childen do all things so that the childen become more dependent. Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern.Some people are in alarm that if mation the problem,children will be in more positve condition in the future.What worse is that they will be weaker and weaker when they compete in the society. So what is the solusion about that? To make their childen become independent,parents should let them solve problems themslves nomatter in daily life or study.To begain with,it's their duty to make their sleeproom clean,so parents shouldn't invole that.Besides,