2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；句式变化较丰富，若注意文中个别句子错误会更棒；作者在学术词汇方面还有很大的空间，还要注意单词拼写。

There is an old saying goes that " It is unwise to judge a person by their appearance ", which aims at informing us of a truth that we should judge a person by his inner virture instead of his apearance . Although it is the experience of our forefathers , however, it is still applicable even today. It is universially acknowledged that to loving beautiful things is human nature . Even in many companies required their employees to have a good looking. However , good looking may make people impressed , but their inner virture is more important . Having a beautiful appearance cannot bring success ,someone want to be successed demanded to strive hardly . Taking a look around , we can find examples too many to enumerate. For instance , Hellen Keller , a notable female writter in America , when she was a child , she suffered a disease so that lose her sight . But she never lose her enthusiam to live, instead of complain the unfairness of life , she chosen to struggle for her better life and became a great writter eventually. Even though she has no good looking , but her name has been carved in people's heart forever . As far as I am concerned , it is imperative for us to form a correct attitude to judge a person. A man in successed , required to have courage , wisdom ,vigorous and persistence rather than his beautiful . Just like an old greek pilosopher said , "Beautiful is temporary , only the virture is permanent in our life ."