拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;可以适当增加副词的使用。
Beijing is an ancient, political city, which enjoy a high level of civilization and large sums of places of interests. I love the Palace Museum the most, so I will definitely take my foreign friend there. The Forbidden City was the imperial palace for twenty-four emperors of the Ming and the Qing dynasties. Since yellow is the symbol of the royal family, it is the dominant color in the Palace Museum. Not only the decorations in the palace are painted yellow, but also the bricks on the roof are made yellow by a special process. In ancient China, the dragon was considered the most powerful of all creatures. Therefore, dragon is considered as a symbol of the emperor. When entering the Forbidden City, you are surrounding with various patterns of dragons. Visitors can see a large sum of precious treasures, which is made of jade, silver or gold.