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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71660
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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Beijing is an ancient, political city, which enjoy a high level of civilization and large sums of places of interests. I love the Palace Museum the most, so I will definitely take my foreign friend there. The Forbidden City was the imperial palace for twenty-four emperors of the Ming and the Qing dynasties. Since yellow is the symbol of the royal family, it is the dominant color in the Palace Museum. Not only the decorations in the palace are painted yellow, but also the bricks on the roof are made yellow by a special process. In ancient China, the dragon was considered the most powerful of all creatures. Therefore, dragon is considered as a symbol of the emperor. When entering the Forbidden City, you are surrounding with various patterns of dragons. Visitors can see a large sum of precious treasures, which is made of jade, silver or gold.

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