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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:3004
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题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

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The Way Success As the saying goes:Where there is a will,there is a way.Nothing is impossible.That means everybody is able to be successful if they are desired to become successful. Nevertheless,the way for everyone to seek success may be various.Of course,those ways have their own advantages and it's importance for humans to be approprite to themselves.Therefore,let's talk about the topic of the way to success.To begin with,siginificance should be attached on the attitude hence it depends on everything.Secondly,it's the best way which matches with our own for us to believe ourselves.Though some successful and famous people have their own called the secret of success as well as amazing reputaion and influence,we are all so smart that we are able to succeed with our own ways.Last but not least,we should take actions once having some ideas. From my perspective,confidence should be high on our agenda as well as good attitude.At the same time,we should be active and be willing to hardwoking for success.

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