小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My Good Friend I hava a good friend,she is 26 old,she is very betiful,she has a back eyes and back hair,she 168 centimetre height of her。we live together and coocke together，but now we long time no see ，I very miss her。I hope she better and better ，she marry a America man ，she had two childen。