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I see many people around us are different,some people are successed in their life,while some others are not. For the last ten years,I couldn't find my life direction. Every day,when I finished my daily class,I returned my dormintory and then watched TV or just listened to the music,did nothing else.After about two yeays,I find a goal where my future goes.I love our earth ,so I decided to put all my heart into protecting our environment.First,I need to know something about our living environment,I read many revelent books to enrich my knowledge.Second,I joined a club on How to Protect our Environment.There're lots of people like me gather together ,using their great ideas and organizing many activities to encourage others to do something about our environment.I feel that when I do something that I really cares ,time always goes fast.And I know my life will be wonderful if I do right things.
