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作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；文中学术词汇使用较丰富，但是拼写错误比较多。
When it comes to the question "how do you define the meaningful life",people vary in their opinons and everyone has his own interpretation of it.Just as the saying"the greates use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it "which reveals the truth about meaningful life.So how do we far away from the perplexed and dull life ? For one thing,peolpe should set a clear aim for herself instead of following her choas idea.When we are young,we should strive for our dreams,not only academically but aslo mentally,for this is a utmost foundation for the future success in the harsh competition society.For another,we ought to do some charitable things.In the process of helping others,we can get a deeper understanding of life,thus a sense of cherishing life. To sum up,everyone has their own right to choose the life style which he'd like to lead in.We should bear in mind that doing something that is meaningful is of important.
