作者句法知识较为扎实,可增加复合句和从句使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;作者能较多样地使用词汇,学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。
When it comes to the question "how do you define the meaningful life",people vary in their opinions and everyone has his own interpretation of it.Just as the saying"the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it "which reveals the truth about it.So how do we avoid the perplexed and dull life ? For one thing,peolpe should set a clear aim for herself instead of following her chaos idea.When we are young,we should strive for our dreams,not only academically but aslo mentally,for this is the utmost foundation for the future success in the harsh competition of society.For another,we ought to do some charitable things.In the process of helping others,we can get a deeper comphrehension of life,thus a sense of cherishing life. To sum up,everyone has their own right to choose the life style which he'd like to lead in.We should bear in mind that doing something that is meaningful is of importance.