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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:35浏览次数:16960
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题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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The most interesting place in our country In my opinion,Changsha,is a main central city of China.I also think it is the most interesting place in my world.Here are some reasons,which may be helpful for you. At first,i'm studying in changsha,but it not affect my judge.Changsha is famous for interest places.Such as,there are history places like han tomb of mawangdui and the biggest muser in Hunan provice. It have tourist places,just like orange ilsand 、 tianxin pavolion as well as meixihu lake.These places is worth to go sighting. Then,delicious food in here.for example,like duck with sweet juice ect. Less than but least,if you come to here,youwil lbe welcomed.The reason is that people in here is pretty friendly. If it is convenient for you,welcome to China,welcome to Changsha.

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