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the most interesting place in our country In my opinion,Changsha,is central city in China.I also think it is the most interesting place in my world.Here are some reasons,which may be helpful for you. At first,i'm studying in changsha,but it not affect my judge.Changsha is famous for interest places.There are history places like han tomb of mawangdui and the biggest muser in hunan provice. It have tourist places,such as orange ilsand 、 tianxin pavolion as well as meixihu lake.theseplaces is worth to go sighting. Then,delicious food in here.for example,duck with sweet juice ect. Less than but least,if you come to here,you wil lbe welcomed.the reason is that people inherent is pretty friendly. If it is convenient for you,welcome to China,welcome to Changsha.