拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Just as the saying goes:"All roads lead to Rome".When we finally got some things such like money or something else.Don't put them all in one place. That is unwise to put all you have in same way but just considering them from all aspects. Considering from various aspects plays a crucial role in our life.For one thing,learning to consider from all perspective to help make us all-rounder individuals.For example,when we meet the hard that we never faced,we should have to think about what should we do to handle it.Not in one way,just considering from all aspects.The problem can be solved.For another thing,considering could develop our ability in creative.For instance,the people especially in China.As everyone knows the young people the lack of creativity.Why cause this phenomenon?Personally think because we pay a short time to considering matters.No matter what had we learn.In start,we should take all aspects for the new things. To summary,it's significant ways to take considering from all aspects that will help us to avoid the unnecessary problems.Don't put all your eggs in one basket.This is importance of our lives.Just bear that in your mind.