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题目要求：
Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目分析：
两个态度都片面。所以不要急于选择。我们真正希望的是，不慌不忙(with full composure)，却很有效率(efficient)。所以，我更倾向于carefu planning。因为careful planning是成功的关键。另外，也要看是什么样的事情，工作、学习，都喜欢尽快结束(give it an end as quickly as possible)，但是与朋友消遣，与家人相伴，却不应该匆匆忙忙(bustle up)，而应该at a slower place。用词灵活多样，也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays, society is incessantly developing. As an result, the industrial manner of life is also to be more rapid and effective. Some people, on the other hand, choose a leisured life. In my point of view, I preferably believe a speedy life is my priority because it not only leads our life to be valuable, but it also helps us to be more successful. To begin with, a valuable life is a way of life in which we can do some things, such as earning a lot of money or helping a lot of other people, to contribute to development of society. Taking Bill Gates in US as an clear-cut example, he grew up a normal family, and so he does not have enough money to establish a big company. However, by his patient and continuous efforts, beginning with a small factory, his computer company is to gradually be the biggest and the most famous on relationship’s computer of field in the world. In this case, his overzealous life has significant value to help a number of other people’s lives. Finally, I strongly believe that a quick and effective life will help us to more easily achieve meaningful lives. Besides a meaningful life, a busy life also lead us to be a early success. Having a comfortable and famous life is a dream of anyone. However, it is not every people who can obtain this goal. You must be really hard working, over come a lot of challenges to handle your goals in the shortest time if possible. In this time, your life is a whirl where you always feel busy. Beethoven spend all his living time to music, and so he became a very famous musician. Another example is president Ho Chi Minh of Vietnam, all his life spend to the independent of Vietnamese. The final result is that Vietnam is a self- control nation in the world. In event, both Beethoven and president Ho’s life are very very rapid and effective. All in all, I think that we should choose a quick and effective life in the present time when everything continuous change second, specially young people. because it will lead us to be successful people.
