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句式变化较为明显，句法基础不错；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；请注意分段。
Living in an age,the divorce rate is superisingly high .Living in an age,people keep yelling that love is a trap.living in a age,the concept that marriage is a cermentary gain its ground.It seems that happiness just cannot last But there is old saying gose that happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them.I cannot agree more.A good case in point is that there are a lot annoying and trivial things in daily life,however my parents solve them swimmingly instead of kicking the ball around.So conspacuous is that problems are everywhere but once you make thing work out,you will find happiness eventually. Admittedly,there are so much problems dose give rise to the lost of happiness but if you have the ability to solve them happiness will superise you.
