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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12902
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;请注意分段。

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In the picture, the parents are sending a massage to their son Andy to tell him that they are fine and hope to see him the next time he goes downstairs. Maybe the son never leaves his computer or cellphone and usually doesn't communicate with his parents face to face. As a result, the parents can only talk with him through the internet. Actually, it's a common phenomenon in our life nowadays. With the development of electronic communication instruments such as QQ,We-chat, almost everyone has an account and is addicted to the electric communication. I think it's so bad that people just be bathed in the internet but ignore the family and friends beside them. It makes the loves between people become fade up and break the relationship among people. In my opinion, the electric communication will never take the place of the face-to-face communication. Because people is a kind of animal that need comfort from their companies. If one day people just communicate with each other through the internet, we may become mad.

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