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Living in an age,the divorce rate is superisingly high.Living in an age,people keep yelling that love is a trap.Living in an age,the concept that marriage is a cemetery gain its ground.It seems that happiness just cannot last. But there is an old saying gose that happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them.I cannot agree more.A good case in point is that there are a lot of annoying and trivial things in daily life,however my parents solve them swimmingly instead of kicking the ball around.So conspicuous is that problems are everywhere but once you make thing work out,you will find happiness eventually. Admittedly,there are so many problems dose give rise to the lost of happiness but if you have the ability to solve them happiness will surperise you.