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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Living in an age,the divorce rate is surprisingly high.Living in an age,people keep yelling that love is a trap.Living in an age,the concept that marriage is a cemetery gain its ground.It seems that happiness just cannot last. Nevertheless, there is an old saying goes happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them.I cannot agree more.A good case in point is that there are a lot of annoying and trivial things in daily life,however my parents solve them swimmingly instead of kicking the ball around.So conspicuous is that problems are everywhere but once you make thing work out,you will find happiness eventually. Admittedly,there are so many problems dose give rise to the lost of happiness but if you have the ability to solve them then the happiness will surprise you.
