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题目要求：
Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目分析：
两个态度都片面。所以不要急于选择。我们真正希望的是，不慌不忙(with full composure)，却很有效率(efficient)。所以，我更倾向于carefu planning。因为careful planning是成功的关键。另外，也要看是什么样的事情，工作、学习，都喜欢尽快结束(give it an end as quickly as possible)，但是与朋友消遣，与家人相伴，却不应该匆匆忙忙(bustle up)，而应该at a slower place。学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
People are different on leading their life. Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done as fast as they can, while others prefer to take their time and live a life at a slower pace. Either way is good, but I choose the first style due to two reasons: my personality and my life experience. In the first place, my personality makes me do things fast and go to places in a hurry. I always keep one task in mind: if I save some time, I could do more things. From my experiences, I used to finish all my homework after classes in order to have more of my own time to do other meaningful things. I will read novels or participate in extracurricular activities. I find it helpful to promote learning and lead a life full of variety. This is the major reason why I prefer to get things done fast. In the second place, my life experience teaches me that the faster pace, the better effects. For a long time, I feel secure at a faster pace, since it will leave me a chance to go over my work and correct my mistakes. I think it is useful in many cases especially when answering a test paper. And even when I am going to see a movie, I prefer to get to the cinema earlier for a better seat. There are many other examples in daily life that fully illustrate the advantages of getting things done fast. In conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I would like to say that living life in a fast pace is more appealing for me.
