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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者在学术词汇方面要多下功夫，有些单词拼错了；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
There is a growing tendacy these days ,that massive TV advertising greets us.TV advertising has been integrated into our daily life. Commercial break has some advantages.On the one hand,it's the material basis of many TV station.In China,our audience are unnecessary to pay fees for majority programmes ,for advertisers have paid for us.Besides,it's an important way to get information.For example,many househould women may buy products they are long looking foraccording to TV shopping,the most important is that,they render express delivery service,which greatly ficilitate our life.On the other hand,an assortment of commerce colorized our dull life. Hoever,there are also some disadvantage in TV advertising.For example,excessive sub-quality products appear on screen because of fall short in surveliance.Consequently,a huge popularity of consumers suffer a loss.In addition,a great quantity of TV avvertising has interfere with televiewers. As far as I'm concerned,it's necessary for us to have TV advertising.But it has to strike a balance.
