2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；可适当增加几条从句。

As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, several people are surrounding an elephant, touching it in every aspect with their hands. They all want to figure out the whole image of the elephant, however, it seems that they can not achieve their purpose. From the drawing, we can conclude that the painter wants to convey the message that when we learn a new subject, we should approach a problem from a comprehensive and objective point of view. On the one hand, it’s inevitable that people will make a false decision if they look on just one side of a problem. On the other hand, looking at both side of the shield can help people penetrate the surface and see thing in depth. Moreover, when people make a judgement, they can not only draw lesson from predecessor’s experiences, but also refer to some useful knowledge of books. It is my point of view that, to emphasize the importance of thinking comprehensively is to indicate a powerful way to achieve success. Only in this way can we make a proper decision