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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8979
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;有效的运用了一些复杂句;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

Not To Judge A Person By Appearance when we try to know about a person,we sometimes judge him by his appearance.I think it is unwise and uncertain for us to make great friends.So how to realize people comprehensively without paying attention to their appearance is important. If we want to confront with people with more messages,we should not judge their abilities or qualities by their appearance easily.But they also have lots of potantial strength behind their normal faces,we ignored their hard working when we only focus on their appearance.Besides,I think it is easy for us to lose a lot of cherish friends who will help you in a hurry or share happiness or sorrow timely.Maybe they are significant for your lifetime,and you may give up them if you judge them by their appearance. All in all,when we want to make some friends which are reliable for us,we should not only try to know about them seeing their appearance,but also consider their vital qualities which is kind or honesty in their life.It is also unfair for other people to be judged by their appearance.Trying to refuse it.

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