2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中较丰富地使用学术词汇，但单词拼写错误较多；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays,it's amazing for us to see the rapid development of science and technology.That's no denying that convinience which the high-tech brings benefits our lives and makes us more modern. Nevertheless,every coin has two sides.Though computers are very convinient for our lives and there are ample recourses on the Internet,we should only seek those neccessary informations and use computers properly.To begin with,we should clearly distinguish computers and men.Although computers has strong power and functions,the computer can't replace humans at all leading the world.Secondly,we could use computers immedietly and fully.Last but not least,the real reality always distinguishes with the nature of vurture world. From my perspective,computers used by men are only convenient tools.However,the real world is more wonderful.