2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章丰富的词汇表达请发扬，学术词汇使用也比较准确；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays,it's amazing for us to see the rapid development of science and technology.That's no denying that convenience which the high-tech brings benefits our lives and makes us more modern. Nevertheless,every coin has two sides.Though computers are so convenient for our lives and there are rich resources on the Internet,we should only seek those necessary informations and use computers properly.To begin with,we should clearly distinguish computers and men.Although computers have strong power and functions,the computer can't replace humans at all leading the world.Secondly,we could use computers immediatly and fully.Last but not least,the real reality always distinguishes with the nature of virtual world. From my perspective,computers used by men are only convenient tools.However,the real world is more wonderful.