2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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As is shown in the picture.cell phones has becoming more and more importance and has dawn much attention around the city.The picture is vividly demonstates the truth that the popularity of the cell phones in the city. Their are two reasons to acount for this phenomenon.On the one hand.a majority of people play with their phones when crossing the street and using walking sticks.because the find it much interesting and convenient.One the other hand.cell phones is now no more than a tool.it can also be important news and help people to deal with some difficult problems .like micro-blog.so more and more people like cell phones very much. As far as I'm concerned .cell phones is only a measure to take much convenient for ourself.people should adjust their attitudes and making plans in our life instead of overusing cell phones.