采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;熟练的使用了从句和复杂句;作者学术词汇使用比较准确,不过文中词汇表达贫乏;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;连词使用偏少。
make the conclusions based on what you see and hear is not always right.firstly,when you hear something,you may from someone or many people,it may be wrong,when you see something ,it may be not that,you should research it, calm analysis conclusion,and then make the conclusions,Sometimes the eyes and ears are not reliable
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