2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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With the number of micro-bloggers soaring.Mobile phones has become part of our lives and has drawn much attention around the country.The picture proves the truth that the great popularity of cell phones in China. There are two reasons to account for this phenomenon.On the one hand.A majority of people usually play with their phones even in the crossroad when they are crossing the street and using walking sticks in order to see.Because they find it much convenient to use their phones to take pictures.One the other hand.Mobile phone is now no more than a tool.It can also be important news and help people to deal with some difficult problems.Like micro-blog.So more and more people like mobile phones very much. As far as I'm concerned .Mell phones is only a tool to take much convenient for ourselves.People should adjust their attitudes and making plans in our life instead of overusing mobile phones.