Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
With the number of Internet users soaring.People now can use the computer to electronic communication and it will be replace face-to-face contact.The picture proves the truth that electronic communication can bring much convenient for our lives.It has become part of our life and has drawn much attention around the country. There are two reasons to accound for this phenomenon.One the one hand.as the future of the whole family.parents are thinking their children very much.so they find the computer can help them to play with their children not face to face.One the other hand.parents can learn more and more advanced knowledge on the Internet.because the computer can providing a platform for them to comment about their life. As far as I am concerned.Parents are surely faced with a wide range of the world.Electronic communication are more and more importance in our life.only when