2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

作者词汇基本功不错，建议今后多用学术词汇；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Some complaints can be heard about the big pressure from life or work in large cities, made by people who always think their life are so boring even feel terrible. All of this can be demonstrated that the quality of life is decreasing. However, which reasons can lead to this situation? Firstly, if you observe the quick pace of steps carefully and their irregular diet habits, maybe you can find some reasons. Doing much work can bring about you abundant substances reward, which can satisfy your vanity. So, you devote the whole nevertheless time or strength. However, you do not realize that something can not be satisfied by money or substances, including families’s company, enjoying your lonely time, and so on. Maybe, these things can relaxing you and increase your happiness index. So, do not full of your schedule by your busy work, and try to take a conversation with your heart. However, the same troubles also disturb someone who do not have to do so much work, but they still feel poor quality of their life. Maybe, they could have difficulties on healthy or unharmony family relationship. Healthy problems gradually become more and more serious with the high speed development of economy. Pollutant environment we live in result many diseases, such as heart attack, lung cancer, even though some of them can be cured. The whole of situation is unhappy. On the other hand, varied pressure will be attributed to people’s bad temperature and the subsequent adverse influence will emerge in house. So, how could we do to inhibit thee things to happen? Actually, besides to the enjoying of life that referred before, we should learn to control our temperature and to get along well with others. Finally, environment problem is the thing that need to every citizen to solve rather that only one man can change by him or her subjective consciousness. We should do from small things around us, such as save water, decrease times of driving your car, and so on. I believe only all of us to struggle can get high quality of social life.