2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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Mobile phone with people Nowadays,The mobile phone has already became a necessary thing in people's life.A brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in our daily life. Some people overuse mobile phones.No matter what they do,they can not leave their cell phone.They are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see.That is very dangerous action.And some people play cell phones all day and can't communicate with other people in the real world. I believe that many people know the consequences of overusing cell phone.It is a worse habit.It is harmful for our body and relationship.So,I think all of us should not overuse cell phone any more.