2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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China which is mystry and beautiful land attract many adventurous foreigners. As the third largest country of in the world with 9 600 000 square kilometer, china cross 62 degress of longitude and 49 degrees of latitude . various terrain and climate have created many attractive natural attractions . china is rich of plants animals and mine . the land nurtured many hardwork chinese . china has pride of large populations ,long history /resplendent culture and specific traditional . except four finding ,china has unique articial and hand work,including painting ,writing, opera, embrioidery and sily.