2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者词汇表达较多样灵活，也能较准确地使用学术词汇；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

On the long journey of the long life,I venture to say that failure is inevitable.Even so,we still aspire to success.How can we gain success?From my perspective,there are three sorely crucial points. First,equally intelligent as people are,diligence seems to be more noteworthy than some factors.We ought to bring home to ourselves the significance of diligence.Second,persistence is as vital as diligence.For example,during a long-distance race.Some runners often trumpet others at first.They convince that they must win at the starting line.Nevertheless,the outcome is sometimes much to those runners disappoint.They fail in that they don't adhere to.Success is similar with long-distance race,It requires persistence.Last but not at the least,attitude is consequential as well.As a saying"Attitude is everything".Thus,if we itch to success,we have to possess an optimistic attitude. In a word,as a proverb goes"No pains,no gains",I can't agree with it more.There is no shortcut and no secret to success.