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2004年6月英语四级作文真题:旅游向导

发布时间:2013-05-16 19:02浏览次数:1181
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines: 
Your role: a tour guide
Your audience: a group of foreign tourists
Your introduction should include: 
● some welcoming words   
● the schedule for the day    
● a description of the place the tourists will be visiting (e.g. a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)   
You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.  
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若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;文中词汇表达丰富度不足,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

Hello,i'm your tour guide.Welcome to the most beauty garden in the whole world,Chengdu.Everyone could have a happy day in Chengdu. These is our schedule for the day.First,we will visit the biggist single building in the world,Global Center.It is consisted of shopping center,hotel,water pool.People can go shopping in there and eat dinner in there,even sleep in there.Second,we will go to Chunxi Road,the oldest road in Chengdu.And then we will go to Tianfu Square,the center of Chengdu.Chengdu is a city built surrounding Tianfu Square.

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