作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;从句偏少,建议平时练习中加大单词的记忆;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket,people may trust someone else,then deal with things always listen to others,sometimes we should have ourselves mind. First,we must read variety books,improve our knowledge.just as a saying said:“knowledge is power."by the way,we can make great decisions. Then,we should practice more times,communicate with others and make friends.when we have problems or challengs we could ask for help. Last,