拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识掌握的错误,可适当增加从句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
A letter declining a job offer Dear Sir or Madam, I have received the letter from your corporation offering me the opportunity to work as an assistant manager. Thank you very much for your kind offer of this precious opportunity! However, I have to say sorry for not being able to accept your offer. Shortly after applying for this position in your corporation, I received the admission letter from UCLA and was told this world-famous university would like to accept me as a graduate student in their Business School. After serious consideration, I have finally made the decision to go to the US first for my postgraduate study, which will absolutely promote my future career development. So I would like to apologize that I have to decline your kind offer, but I believe that after my graduation, if I’m still lucky enough to get such great chance to work for you, I will definitely be a more capable team player in your corporation. Finally, I love to offer my undying gratitude for all the efforts you have made in processing my application, and your kind understanding is highly appreciated. Wish you a Happy New Year and wish your corporation even greater success in 2006!