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湖南怀化市2012-2013年高二上学期期末试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:13浏览次数:2762
要求:
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是一名英语课代表,发现部分同学对英语学习失去了信心。请你写一篇词数不少于100字的英语短文来鼓励他们,唤起其对学习英语的兴趣。
写作要点:
1、学习英语的重要性。
2、提高英语成绩的措施(至少3点)。
用户的作文(系统评分85.5分
评语:

拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识掌握的错误,可适当增加从句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

A letter declining a job offer Dear Sir or Madam, I have received the letter from your corporation offering me the opportunity to work as an assistant manager. Thank you very much for your kind offer of this precious opportunity! However, I have to say sorry for not being able to accept your offer. Shortly after applying for this position in your corporation, I received the admission letter from UCLA and was told this world-famous university would like to accept me as a graduate student in their Business School. After serious consideration, I have finally made the decision to go to the US first for my postgraduate study, which will absolutely promote my future career development. So I would like to apologize that I have to decline your kind offer, but I believe that after my graduation, if I’m still lucky enough to get such great chance to work for you, I will definitely be a more capable team player in your corporation. Finally, I love to offer my undying gratitude for all the efforts you have made in processing my application, and your kind understanding is highly appreciated. Wish you a Happy New Year and wish your corporation even greater success in 2006!

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